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  • #98726
    -Gar5-
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    I’ve had this e-book project sitting on my computer since about February-March without it being finished.

    I’m looking for ideas and suggestions from Bugsters to include in this White Genocide ebook.

    http://whitegenocideproject.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/10/White-Genocide-Ebook.pdf

    I’m also working on a children’s cartoon ebook, any suggestions would be welcome as well.

    http://whitegenocideproject.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/10/124_test.pdf

    #98731
    Fred R
    Participant

    The White Genocide Ebook would work well as a script for a video.
    I was reading it imagining a video narrated from the book and illustrated something like this:
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ppIS19La8W8

    #98733
    Jason
    Participant

    Great idea Gar and great start.

    #98735
    Carloman
    Participant

    Just looking them over quickly I had the following thoughts:

    In the first one you write: “Every group today has taken land from others. The only difference is that White people were better at it.” Well, that second sentence could be taken as White supremacist. Besides, Genghis Khan was pretty good at taking land, too, wasn’t he? And so were the Arab Muslims and the Ottoman Turks. I’d take out the second sentence and perhaps replace it with examples of non-White conquests.

    You also write “Oriental Asia is not being globally ‘diversified’.” Although the word “Oriental” was a perfectly respectable word when I was a kid, I think today it’s considered a hate word (unless it’s being applied to a restaurant run by an Oriental, er, I mean an Asian, in which case it’s cultural enrichment). I would replace it with “East Asia.”

    Will the first e-Book have any references to BUGS or how to join us?

    In the second one, you seem to be suggesting that White rabbits/people are better than the other species/races. It’s not that I disagree, but I’m not sure that that’s the best way to present the message. On the other hand, I don’t have any suggestions as to how to make it better.

    #98758
    -Gar5-
    Participant

    Thanks for the suggestions Carloman.

    Yes, it’ll have a link to Bugs.

    #98759
    Scott
    Participant

    Hey -Gar5-

    I just came across this, but it’s late. I’ll try to take a look at it over the next couple days and see if I can contribute any thoughts/ideas. I think it’s a great idea.

    #98781
    Scott
    Participant

    I agree with Carloman on this one.

    “The only difference is that White people were better at it.”

    It comes across strong.

    The rest of the book looks pretty good.
    Easy to read, Stays on point, and free.

    Way to go!

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